Tips and tricks

I posted this in the discussion thread, but incase you missed it there

I've also got around to reading all the shows (atleast the EWA ones, I'm absolutely miles behind (about a month) on HWA shows, so that's my next task) and just want to say that everyone involved did a real good job. Props to you all. A couple of little pointers though

To EHC :- I noticed this in your shows as well as a couple of your promos, sometimes it's a little hard to recognise what is an acvtion and what is speech.

Eg: (off the top of my head)

Barbie Panzer: Puts phone away, what do you want

It's only a little thing, but every little helps. What I do is encase stage directions in two '*' when they are mixed in with the text.

Eg:

Barbie Panzer: So we're now going to talk to Rob Rage *smiles* So Rob, how do you feel things are going

It just means things flow better

To Destruction: You've really been impressing me with some of your shows, Carnages have been great and it's been cool to see the transition of it from Superstars-esque show to a full blown brand. I picked up on one little thing though. Sometimes your writing seemed to be a bit rushed.

Eg:

Destruction then ran down and attacked Ryku causing a disqualification

Go into more detail, tell the people what happened and how it happened

Eg:

After going for that big german suplex, Ryku goes to the corner and starts stomping his leg up and down in the style of his mentor, the heart break kid Shawn Michaels

Johnny Hot makes his way to his feet but just before Ryku can hit his signature superkick Gaileo comes out of nowhere, jumps up on the apron and hotshots the Isle of Man native

Howard: Oh come on, he just ruined a great match

The other one (I forget his name): He's just stopping Ryku from hitting an illegal manouver

The ref immediatly calls for the bell giving Ryku the DQ win, but that doesn't stop Gaileo. He slides into the ring and begins beating down on his nemesis with huge rights and lefts

It just makes the show that much better.

Secondly, instead of writing initials for people talking, write either their first or second name. It can just get a little confusing to the casual viewer, and writing there full name just clears things up a bit. I too used to do initials, but after talking to a few more seasoned eFed owners, I decided to go with full names. It's just better

But I really was just nit picking there. Really good shows, all of them